Neuroleptic Skeptic

Jeffrey Powell 1979 (Pittsburgh, PA)



It’s just a little pill
that they say will fix your nerves;
An antipsychotic
- which will normalize your aim.

“We need you to fit in
and we need you to be tame.”
So take it every day
while the casuist observes.

They don’t have any proof
but it probably won’t hurt.
Just trust they know what’s best
- you’ll get used to side effects.

This simple, latest guess
– that can’t promise it won’t vex –
Is just a no-think shot
to help put you in the dirt.

About this poem

Are psychiatric patients becoming psychoactive captives?

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Written on September 12, 2022

Submitted by JokerGem on July 11, 2023

Modified by JokerGem on July 11, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XAXB XBXA XCXX XXXC
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 473
Words 99
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4

Jeffrey Powell

A bit of an introvert, Jeffrey enjoys using words and poetry as an outlet for expressing his thoughts and feelings. He tends to play by his own rules and darts in and out of the civilized world, as avoiding the conventional gathering is more his style. Jeffrey lives with his fraternal twin whom he enjoys sharing a laugh with at the opportune time. more…

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3 Comments
  • ritchiechelle
    Brilliant
    LikeReply9 months ago
    • JokerGem
      So glad you feel this way...thank you for the add!
      LikeReply9 months ago
  • Kaytee
    Such a good poem and definitely something to think about. I’ve worked in mental health long enough to know sometimes people truly do need medication to survive, however, my own journey taught me that meditation numbed me and changed my personality. I’m glad to be drug free today. 
    LikeReply9 months ago
    • JokerGem
      I absolutely hope all concerned do think more deeply and research what this stuff can really do --many folks are being silenced and strong-armed against their will while trending research is revealing that, for as efficacious as prescribers may or may not think these drugs are, outcomes are not improving and often worsening. I will say, I wish that medicine in this format will one day be used as a last resort and not a no-matter-what. Yes, the numbing and altering of our essence is the very reason to be highly reluctant to administer these ministrations! If you don't mind me asking, what capacity do you work in the mental health field, because I also have been surrounded by that atmosphere for quite a long time to have arrived at my viewpoints? Also thank you for reading and commenting ;> 
      LikeReply9 months ago
    • Kaytee
      I worked as a social worker in a psychosocial rehab program helping people with severe mental illness get back into the community. I taught social skills and did some psychotherapy. I was not involved in prescribing meds. I also worked to advocate for client rights in their own treatment amd decision making even if that choice was to stop medication. 
      LikeReply9 months ago
    • JokerGem
      Admirable work IMO...plus the advocate position is definitely more up my alley as you could probably guess. I'm sure you saw many levels of disabilities though as well and in every case the goal should be to preserve functionality and not to the detriment of the psyche. 
      LikeReply 19 months ago
    • Kaytee
      The world definitely needs more advocates
      LikeReply9 months ago
    • JokerGem
      Yes, the world also needs to operate with more compassion and humanity if there is any interest at all in retaining such things.
      LikeReply9 months ago
  • Vixility
    Excellent point! It often seems as if big pharm (farm) is just making docile creatures out of us while their pockets are getting fatter. Almost reminds me of the way beekeepers use smoke to pacify bees.
    LikeReply9 months ago
    • JokerGem
      Is this where the phrase, "blowing smoke" originated?? Seems likely. -And they can only make you docile if you, "take the pills" without a thought.
      LikeReply 19 months ago

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