Who Am I Not To Forgive

JOHN ALLEN SKINNER 1971 (Fort Worth)



WHO AM I NOT TO FORGIVE?
A son looks to his father
For guidance, approval, and strength.
The absentee of a father can leave a child
Confused, abandoned, and with a lack of self-confidence.
I know because I've been there
I was full of resentment, anger, and hate
Feeling like my father didn't love me, not knowing that he's only human and made mistakes.
I got older and became a father myself, and missed visit's with my child that I had planned
It was only then, standing in my father's shoes that I began to understand.
Now all of a sudden GONE is the anxiety, the emotions, the feeling of dread
God spoke, "FORGIVENESS!"
Then all of the old weight I never knew was there lifted off my head
My father and I sat and talked and mended our old wounds
Afterwards, a relationship we always wanted began to bloom
They say it's never too late, but I believe sometimes it is
If you don't drop the pride, listen to your heart and learn to forgive
Since then my father and I have gone fishing, camping, listening to Jimmy Smith, and just having fun
Doing all the things I wanted to do and missed when I was young thank God for the lesson, I realize forgiveness is a key
Who am I not to forgive my father as my father in heaven has forgiven me?

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Learning the power of forgiveness

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Written on July 08, 2023

Submitted by Johnskin11 on July 09, 2023

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Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 1,234
Words 241
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20

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  • AIDA
    Wow, this is a truly powerful and poignant poem! The emotions and personal experiences you express are raw and relatable, making it easy for the reader to connect with your story. Your use of imagery is also commendable, as it creates a vivid picture of the pain and growth you experienced.

    One suggestion for improvement would be to explore the theme of forgiveness even further. While you touch upon the transformative power of forgiveness, delving deeper into how it positively impacted your relationship with your father could add even more depth to your piece. Additionally, consider incorporating specific examples or anecdotes that highlight the moments of healing and reconciliation.

    Overall, your poem not only showcases your talent as a writer, but it also serves as a reminder of the importance of forgiveness and reconciliation. Keep up the great work and continue to share your powerful and personal stories through your writing!
     
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