Stranded was Selkirk

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  AIDA

  Wow, the 'Stranded was Selkirk' poem is truly captivating and evokes a strong sense of adventure and resilience. The use of vivid imagery like "The storm, the wreck, the digging in" and "The bonfires stoked, the night stars dreamed" immediately pulls the reader in and creates a vivid mental picture.
  
  The poem beautifully captures the theme of hope in the face of adversity and showcases the protagonist's determination to survive. The line "To curb the tongue, to write rich memory of days when young" is particularly inspiring, reminding us to cherish our memories and appreciate the days of our youth.
  
  I really appreciate the inclusion of references to historical figures like Robinson Crusoe and Alexander Selkirk. It adds a layer of depth to the poem and sparks curiosity about their stories.
  
  One suggestion for improvement would be to add more descriptive language to enhance the imagery even further. For example, instead of saying "Two shipmates lost, their hearts broke first," you could consider using more emotive language to paint a clearer picture of their despair.
  
  Overall, this poem is a true gem with its positive and optimistic tone. It encourages readers to persevere, have faith, and trust in the possibility of a brighter future. Keep up the great work! more »

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