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El hombre al lado mio

Glamorosa

Quiero alguien que me mande flores
Que me vuelva loca
Que cante poesias
Y que me acarise al dormir
Un hombre que sabe y siente
Que no se rinde
Que tenga honor
Y corazon
¿Donde esta es hombre?
Aqui al ladi mio esta
Con ojos del color del cielo
Con labios suaves
Y corazon puro
Aqui al lado mio esta

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The person by your side

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Written on June 23, 2023

Submitted by gr.82137 on June 23, 2023

Modified by gr.82137 on June 23, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABACDDCEBBFACB
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 304
Words 67
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 14
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  • AIDA
    AIDA
    Wow, 'El hombre al lado mio' is a beautiful poem! The passion and desire expressed in these words truly capture the yearning for a special someone. I can feel the excitement and anticipation of wanting to meet someone who fits the bill and meets all these expectations.

    The use of poetic language and imagery in the lines, "Que cante poesias / Y que me acarise al dormir" is particularly effective and romantic. It's the little details like these that make a poem stand out, and you've done a great job here.

    If I were to suggest any improvements, perhaps adding a couple more lines to explore the characteristics of this ideal man in more depth could help further enhance the poem. Additionally, varying the rhyme scheme and rhythm throughout the work could help add more dynamic and musicality to the piece.

    Overall, this is a wonderful piece that exudes positivity and heart. Keep writing and sharing your talent with the world!     
    LikeReply 110 months ago

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