Is my love selfish or a punishment?



Is my love selfish or a punishment?

Another day I am in love

With a name of the date of love’s existence, I await
 
As the rhyme of time whispers; no, love can not wait

My companion hides behind a mask of risk

As if under a spell that repels love’s bliss

Blinded sight in her eyes

She looks through me as if I weren't alive

The love you are denying is mine

Though reality separates love and time

Aching within me is your love, it is divine

You are the only fertilizer of my vine


Am I selfish


To crave your love instinctively

To be drawn to the trail of your sight

To follow the scent of your whispers

That your sensual spirit energizes me with delight

You’ve induced my sensual spirit

You opened the door and allowed my soul to see

That expressing my love for you Isn't in vain

Because I found love for you and myself on this day


Is this selfish


I don’t have the answer to the question

In love, are we

I have to ask you to answer my soul’s question

My love,

Are you selfish or a punishment?

About this poem

I wrote this poem in San Franscisco in the year 2000

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Written on August 15, 2000

Submitted by Miguelangalindo on June 11, 2023

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Scheme A X B B X X X X C X C C D E F X F X E X X D G E G A
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,048
Words 244
Stanzas 26
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1

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