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Oh! divine one

Mubashair Naseer 2002 (Hattian Bala)

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My heart is swarming
with incomplete dreams
and some desires
with sense of loneliness
and some whims
“oh! divine one”
watching! from heaven
is this a dream or hallucination?
and if its real, then let me decay
oh! my friend and my savior
bless me with light
or raise me to you,
as I don’t want to live
with this devouring darkness...
             By: Mubashair Naseer

About this poem

This poem expresses longing for divine guidance amidst unfulfilled dreams and loneliness, questioning the nature of reality. The speaker seeks light to dispel the consuming darkness and contemplates decay or ascendance.

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Written on February 28, 2023

Submitted by Mubashair_01 on June 09, 2023

Modified by Mubashair_01 on June 09, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCDEFFFGHIJKDH
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 374
Words 70
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 15
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