Analysis of Oh! divine one
My heart is swarming
with incomplete dreams
and some desires
with sense of loneliness
and some whims
“oh! divine one”
watching! from heaven
is this a dream or hallucination?
and if its real, then let me decay
oh! my friend and my savior
bless me with light
or raise me to you,
as I don’t want to live
with this devouring darkness...
By: Mubashair Naseer
| Scheme | ABCDEFFFGHIJKDH |
|---|---|
| Poetic Form | Tetractys (27%) |
| Metre | 11110 10011 01010 111100 011 1011 10110 110110010 011111101 1110110 1111 11111 111111 11010010 111 |
| Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
| Characters | 374 |
| Words | 70 |
| Sentences | 6 |
| Stanzas | 1 |
| Stanza Lengths | 15 |
| Lines Amount | 15 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 18 |
| Words per line (avg) | 4 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 276 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 65 |
About this poem
This poem expresses longing for divine guidance amidst unfulfilled dreams and loneliness, questioning the nature of reality. The speaker seeks light to dispel the consuming darkness and contemplates decay or ascendance.
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Written on February 28, 2023
Submitted by Mubashair_01 on June 09, 2023
Modified by Mubashair_01 on June 09, 2023
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