The Golden Ships



On waters still and never seen
By light of sun or moon or gleam
Of silver lanterns hung by harbor’s gate
They wait.

Golden ships with midnight sails
That never stir to Earthly gales
But with the chill from looming mountain heights
Take flight.

The bay is placid, circled round
By seven snow clad mountains found
On certain moonless nights in summer’s heat
To speak.

Their voices gentle breezes blow,
The cold of airless spaces know,
And horror felt in empty places there
They bear.

In answer drifting mists ascend
And ghostly ships like visions bend
Their courses, reaching for eternity,
To sea.

What say those unheard voices, cold?
Where bound those ships of pale gold?
What cargos held in darkness carry they
Away?

About this poem

Inspired by a lullaby sung by Dick Van Dyke.

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Submitted by michaelw.64270 on May 01, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXAA BBXX CCXX DDEE FFGG HHII
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 737
Words 139
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

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3 Comments
  • lovingempath
    Wow! I love your style!
    LikeReply8 months ago
  • michaelw.64270
    I am sorry to say there is a typo in this version: "Of silver lanterns" in the first stanza should be "Or silver lanterns".
    LikeReply8 months ago
  • Jewoo525
    The ethereal atmosphere and cool dread added to an incredibly palpable poem. It reminded me of my favorite works of occult fiction and Lovecraftian storytelling. A type of curiosity and fear that pulls you into two pieces but inevitably drags you in the same direction. I loved it. 
    LikeReply10 months ago

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