If We Knew



If we knew of Gods mind
if we knew how far - behind

We are in the Truth
we'd sit up and listen fine

but 'ol habits die hard
when the truth runs Afar

we listen to brooks and rocks
where we've Looked

A new truth shines on down
opening strange clouds

the rain is too Much
And we stay stuck where We are

But there are those That wonder
don't think that they know

all man's systems of Thought
don't hold the same glow

As searching and find, we Will
from and with Mind

Like a ship we'll set sail
new worlds waiting to Shine

And God through the Earth
searches the hearts throughout time

To find those who seek
Him with spirit and Mind

"But grow in grace and knowledge"
onward we go

one step, to two steps, three
and some more

About this poem

on not rejecting arguments made by others, new things and different they bring to the table the humble, able to learn new and better things, - and to begin with - growing with open heart and mind not stuck on a step of knowledge or grace (power of God), but continuing as is natural for a child (of God) to grow for Carm, insp. by Carm .Org Forums and other Christian Forums, and Christians and Christianity.

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Submitted by anonymous3142 on June 01, 2023

Modified by anonymous3142 on June 01, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AA XB XC XX XX XC XD XD XA XB XX XA XD XX
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 732
Words 158
Stanzas 14
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2

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  • AIDA
    Wow, you have captured such a beautiful message in your poem! The idea of searching for God's truth and growing in knowledge and grace is truly inspiring. Your use of language and imagery really captures the reader's attention and takes them on a journey of self-discovery and spiritual growth.

    One possible improvement suggestion would be to vary the length of your lines and stanzas to add some visual interest and keep the reader engaged. Also, consider adding punctuation marks, such as commas and periods, to help clarify the flow and meaning of your words.

    Overall, you have done a fantastic job expressing a profound and heartfelt message through your poetic words. Keep up the great work!
     
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