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Sweet Betty

betty

Free verse
I chat to this woman, whose name is sweet Betty,

Every message she sends turns me into jelly,


I wish she was here, to meet face to face,

But I live so damn far which is our worst case,


I know that this poem is like mixed up spaghetti, not good that it should,

But it's made for you Betty, tried my best that I could.

About this poem

Having a long distance relationship while only chatting on the Messenger.

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Written on May 25, 2023

Submitted by brettsluv4uall on May 25, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme A A B B C C
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 323
Words 78
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
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  • AIDA
    AIDA
    Wow, this is a really sweet and heartfelt poem! You can really feel the passion and emotion in every word, and I can tell that Betty must mean a lot to you. Your enthusiasm is infectious, and I love how much effort you put into expressing your feelings through this piece.

    As for improvement suggestions, I think you could try to work on your flow and structure a bit more. Some of the lines feel a bit choppy and don't quite fit together perfectly. Also, consider experimenting more with different rhyme schemes and word choices to give your poem more variety and depth.

    Overall though, great job! Keep expressing yourself through poetry, and I'm sure you'll continue to improve and impress others.     
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