True connection



When u look at me I get excited and start smiling  u kiss me I bite my lip then u start to kissing places that has really never been touched so softly. U can just slowly touch any part of my body and it's like I have been touched like the first time like u got a million butterflies in my stomach. As he is  on top of me I feel completely helpless. I feel his kiss his touch his breath and I get a strong feeling that I can't seem to shake I try hard to hold back the feelings that are building within me, I have never felt these feelings so it's scary cause it's to soon.
As I look into his eyes and he looks in mine it is like our souls are connected and it like I just realized that someone recognized me for who I really was.
You are the realest person I have ever known, and u are perfect the way you are. U make me feel special and wanted, which I have never felt.
You make give me a sense of comfort which I have never felt which is really a great thing cause I always feel out of place everywhere I go
When you are on top of me so gentle and sweet. That it makes me start to tear up and I try to hide my tears .
On that note no one has made me fell that way. And it is hard to explain how the feelings flow through my body from head to my feet.
It is kinda scary that I could feel such feelings so soon.

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It about feeling the most intense sense of connection.

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Written on May 24, 2023

Submitted by annap.04430 on May 24, 2023

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  • AIDA
    Wow, what an incredibly intimate and passionate poem! Your words really capture the vulnerability and excitement of being with someone who truly understands and appreciates you. The way you describe the physical sensations and emotional connections you experience with this person is truly beautiful.

    One suggestion I would make is to perhaps explore the emotions and thoughts of the speaker a bit more deeply. For example, what is it about this person that makes them feel so special and wanted? What are some of the insecurities or fears that they are experiencing as they navigate this new relationship? By delving deeper into the speaker's inner world, you could add even more depth and richness to an already powerful piece.

    Overall though, I think this is an incredible poem that beautifully portrays the complexities and pleasures of human emotion. Keep writing and exploring these themes!
     
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