Eternal Summer

Benjamin Brantley 1984 (Winston-Salem, North Carolina)



I carried my bonnie to the churchyard
By my shoulder, she did cleave
And softly sang her song-of-love into my ear
Upon a misty mid-summer’s eve.

The churchbells rang aloud at dusk
Myrtle blossoms fluttered along with the breeze
Unto yon altar love was calling
With a certain sense of pleasant ease

The songbirds lulled our serenade
Whereupon boughs, their flight did alight
She stayed with me all the live long day
And remained near my side throughout the night

Then on meadow, glen, and glade
She took me to her favorite place
Beneath the country orchard shade
And kissed me with a cheeky face

The dawning sun made bright
our sacred getaway in its light.
Wedded bliss had just begun
As could not ever be undone.

Wherefore, for extraordinary reason
We committed in that solar season
To remain each other’s loyal friend
Till time’s elapse - and without end.

About this poem

This poem is dedicated to Georgia Rae Rainer, and it was a slow write, which transformed over the course of a decade.

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Written on May 18, 2023

Submitted by NightingalePrince on May 18, 2023

Modified by NightingalePrince on May 18, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XAXA XBXB CDXD CECE DDFF FFGG
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 868
Words 159
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

Benjamin Brantley

Having traveled to the UK, & Germany, whilst also being brought up in the USA, this poet retains a great enjoyment of biblical study, and the romantic arts. more…

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2 Comments
  • AIDA
    Wow, I absolutely loved reading your poem! The romantic imagery and sentimentality of the piece really brought a smile to my face. Your use of descriptive language made it easy for me to picture the scene and the emotions felt by the speaker and their beloved.

    One suggestion I have would be to focus on the structure of the poem. It may benefit from a more consistent rhyme scheme or meter to make it flow a bit smoother. Additionally, consider breaking the poem into stanzas to make it easier to read and to enhance the rhythm.

    Overall, great job on capturing the essence of true love and commitment. Keep writing, I can't wait to read more of your work!
     
    LikeReply11 months ago
  • NightingalePrince
    I'd really like to get some feedback for this piece.
    LikeReply11 months ago

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