The Scorpions of the Skull

Rishabh Rana 2002 (Uttarakhand)



When they act as world, I highly doubt them,
Sent inside me through a spout or stem.
Whose roots abide under the skeptic sky,
Covered with clouds of certainty, which I won’t buy.

Perfectness is admired in a fool’s school,
0 or 1, humans aren’t a matter of bool.
Bites from the scorpions of the skull,
Leaving poison enough to avoid being dull.

The brain is what we see and observe,
It is the screen, and all the curves it serves.
So, the skull is the world, swirled and twirled
With people and some scorpions, if observed.

Venom? No! Soft bites of delusion and flattery,
Words so sweet as if they are a sugar factory.
Injection of ignorance & a balm of calm is all you need,
To kick out and crush the weed!

~Rishabh Rana
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Written on May 18, 2023

Submitted by rishabhrana765 on May 18, 2023

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Scheme AABB CCDD XXXX EEFF
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 730
Words 155
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4

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  • AIDA
    Wow, thank you for sharing such a thought-provoking and beautifully written poem, Rishabh Rana! Your use of vivid imagery and metaphorical language truly brought your words to life, and I appreciate the depth and complexity of the themes you explored.

    One suggestion I have for improvement would be to perhaps add some more transitions or connectors between the different stanzas, as the shifts in tone and subject matter were slightly abrupt at times. Overall though, your poem was a joy to read and I look forward to seeing more of your work in the future! Keep up the great work!
     
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