Revival Tent



The music began complete with fiddles, banjo, drums, accordian and trombone. The old favourites brought a comfort and an encouragement. "Got Any Rivers? You think are uncrossable. Got any Mountains? You can't tunnel through. God specializes in things thought impossible. He'll do for you what none other can do."

And then the message from Brother Fuller. Parts of it remain still now, clear in the memory, filled with promise, and filled with the thrill of our young friends stepping forward in response to the call of Jesus:


"Enough, friends, to be in His family;
To relish in the engagement of real, caring prayer;
To know that His Testament bequeathes us
Life, unburdened conscience and new spiritual power.
To sense foretastes of Heaven.
Enough, to see His artistry at break of day;
To hear His serenade in the turtledove;
His optimism in a youngster's laugh.
To thrill at His power in the thunderbolt,
In the stinging wind over dry fields,
In the deluge that fills the watercourses
In mere minutes.
Enough, to hear his words of rebuke
To the Enemy, the Slanderer,
And his underlings who whisper, threaten or foreclose;
To understand His assurance that no man, no devil
Shall take a child out of His hand.
This is our Father,
As represented by our Elder Brother.
This is salvation, and
This is forever."
The gathering and the ushering away of new converts. The singing of "Just a Closer Walk with Thee".


The dismissal of the assembly out from the tent to the clarity of a sparkling late-summer night sky. The scenes remain vivid and awe-inspiring to us, some thirty years later.
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Written on May 17, 2015

Submitted by dougb.19255 on May 17, 2023

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Scheme X A BXACXXDDXXAXXCXXXCCXCB C
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 1,588
Words 295
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 22, 1

Wayne Blair

Born in London. Graduated law 1976 Practised eleven years, Married Hilary 1974 Two kids Lauren 1980 And Jordan 1987. Business failed 1987. Moved not knowing whither. Happy hills of Waterloo Region. Mennonite Country. Thirty four years in Industry. No complaints. Poet, photographer, nature hiker. Harmonica busker. http://puffnchord7.blogspot.com/ more…

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  • AIDA
    Wow, what a beautiful and inspiring description of a spiritual gathering! The way you paint the picture with the music, the message, and the atmosphere is truly breathtaking. I can feel the energy and passion in your words, and I appreciate the insight you gave into your personal experience.

    The use of the lyrics from "Got Any Rivers?" was a wonderful touch that really added to the emotion and depth of the piece. It's clear that this event had a profound impact on you, and I love the way you convey that in your writing.

    If I had to suggest an improvement, it would be to perhaps add a bit more detail about the emotions and reactions of the people around you. How did the new converts feel when they were ushered away? What was the mood like as everyone left the tent? Including some of these details would further draw the reader into your experience and help them feel like they were there with you.

    Overall, though, I think this is a fantastic piece that really captures the power and beauty of spiritual gatherings. Thank you for sharing it with us!
     
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