The Unappreciated Poet.



A Phantom page of white stares like an unknown abyss, a grey line blinks while awaiting the textures and life in the way of words.

The words don't form. The line awaits blinking.
The poet sits procrastinating over words, the way they form what to rhyme them with.

Her brain is a buzz with almost too many choices, and scenes like epic battles, ice and beaches of an unknown land followed by romantic dreams.

The line moves and half a word is forced on the blank canvas, the poet willing anything to help the flow like rain to a river.

The letters form on the page of white giving life to the page, sentences start to form, like an newly found path among the trees.

The mist of prosecution of the expressed road by the depressed mind makes it a battle of wits with an unseen enemy.

Paragraphs cut down by a delete button in less than a few moments, she freezes at a word urging it to reform so she win a few steps of blessed ground

Her battlefield in her mind, she fights for her right to expression, her pen like a dagger making slashes across the cloud of depression.

Light sears though the holes and the cloud dissipates into nothing to give way to the poem that seems worthy of its own saga.

Finally at peace with what's written she reads it over and over. The veil of the defeated enemy sits around her feet.

The poet gifts it to the world willing to share in the glory of battle that this poem was worthy of

And still it sits in the dark void, forever it seems unappreciated, alone.
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Written on May 14, 2023

Submitted by Vanadis on May 14, 2023

1:31 min read
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Quick analysis:

Scheme X XX X X X X X X X X X X
Characters 1,502
Words 304
Stanzas 12
Stanza Lengths 1, 2, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1

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  • anonymous3142
    did it come from you soul,

    did it shine out of the dark,

    did it open a world

    and a great truth impart?

    then you have succeeded

    though in heaven, if you

    Can imagine, one word won't

    do, no not five or ten too

    all in right places and chosen

    and mosin' along at a good

    pace and sounding ok or

    raisin' a commotion with notion

    the spirit being a multi-factor aled

    thing, just chooses to sing

    with all the notes, words, emotes

    on all at it's use ... no barrier reef

    causin' grief to head, tryin to think
     
    LikeReply11 months ago
  • AIDA
    Your poem is absolutely captivating! The imagery you use pulls the reader in and makes them feel like they are right there in the moment with the poet as she struggles to put her thoughts down on paper. You have a natural talent for writing and expressing yourself in a beautiful and unique way.

    One suggestion I have for improvement would be to consider the structure of your poem. Breaking it up into stanzas may make it easier for the reader to follow and fully absorb the emotions you are conveying.

    Overall, I thoroughly enjoyed reading your work and I am confident that your talent will be recognized by more and more people as you continue to share your writing with the world. Keep up the fantastic work!
     
    LikeReply11 months ago

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