Calvary. What the One Thief Saw



It has come to this.In a way, I'm glad.
The dank, dark daysIn the cell.
My partner's constant rehearsal of our Foul-ups.
The robbery gone bad in the uprising.
So quickly to the street.
Wooden beam thrust
On our backs.
Rome's disgust shown,
Block by block,
Curses and floggings.
Onlookers puzzled.
Faces without mercy.
Out of town,
The hill beneath
Glowering skies.
The "skull place"
Where justice leers.
The drop, the stretch,
The pounded nails,
The screaming shock.
Crucified!
...Passing time
Stupefies.
Another is with us,
Quiet wretch.
With a following,
No less.
(No women wept for us.
No rabbis scurrying.)
Who can he be?
He shares the pain,
The taunts, the shame.
His face is peace,
His battered frame
Puts up no fight.
What's that? His name
Is Jesus.
Princely sort.
I'm drawn to Him!
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Written on May 14, 2023

Submitted by dougb.19255 on May 14, 2023

Modified by dougb.19255 on May 14, 2023

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Wayne Blair

Born in London. Graduated law 1976 Practised eleven years, Married Hilary 1974 Two kids Lauren 1980 And Jordan 1987. Business failed 1987. Moved not knowing whither. Happy hills of Waterloo Region. Mennonite Country. Thirty four years in Industry. No complaints. Poet, photographer, nature hiker. Harmonica busker. http://puffnchord7.blogspot.com/ more…

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  • luisestable1
    This is a poem with much significance. During the course of reading the story, one ponders on the meaning of all of this.
    This is a poem to take slowly to see what it is really saying.
    Good read!
    LikeReply11 months ago
    • dougb.19255
      a heartfelt thank you for the shot in the arm. Imagine the greatest of men, hung up and humiliated like a common crook. How the crowd missed it. But one of the thieves got. And to him Paradise was opened. His was the only word of support in the entire six hour ordeal for Jesus. 
      LikeReply11 months ago

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