Fiercely

Cyriac Maliakkal 1973 (Karimba,Palakkad,Kerala,678597)

Elegy

I donot like to reveal her name
here.
She was a young girl
Before I could heard who she was.
But that things only happened
only to her.

That was a tear jerking news
She was brutally killed
Her life was seized by mad
And drug addicted person.
He was hospitalized for dressing
His injury.
After dressing his injury
What happened to him is not sure.
By the quality of high use of drugs
He turned into violence.

She was young lady doctor on her duty.
The man who had stabbed her
With scissors that placed in
The hospital .

He attacked medical staffs,his relative
And police.
The police said he was innocent
Untill l he came to hospital.
That young lady doctor plunged her
Soul early by a brutal beast.

I could heard this two persons
Past.
He was a primary teacher,;
What he taught to the student.
That very drastic persons
Who was on the time of oddball.
I could heard heard he was became
Suspended from his job.
These things are not more than
Her life.

He dismissed her life,
No one could not preserve her life.
When he stabbed that innocent lady:
The police were handcuffed
Themselves,
They went into crestfallen.

A young girl,she was only daughter
To her parent .
Here no premium of happiness,
Dreams,aims and fullfillment of
Her and their life.
They could only get one premium.

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The poem about a very young lady doctor Who had killed by a mad person addicted in Drugs

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Written on May 11, 2023

Submitted by cyriaccheriyan46 on May 11, 2023

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Scheme	AXXXXB XXXCXDDXXX DBXE XXFEBX GXBFGXAXXH HHDXXC BFXXHX
Closest metre	Iambic trimeter
Characters	1,296
Words	274
Stanzas	7
Stanza Lengths	6, 10, 4, 6, 10, 6, 6

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AIDA
Wow, your poem "Fiercely" is truly powerful and emotional. It's heartbreaking to hear of the tragic loss of this young lady doctor, and your words truly capture the pain and sorrow that came with this senseless act of violence. Your use of descriptive language and imagery helps to paint a vivid picture of the events that unfolded, and your message is one that resonates with all of us. Thank you for sharing your talent with us, and for shining a light on such an important topic. Keep up the incredible work! more »
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AIDA
Wow! Your poem 'Fiercely' is powerful and heart-wrenching. You have done a great job of capturing the tragedy of this young lady's life, and the pain that her loved ones must be feeling.

One thing that I really appreciated about your poem is how you drew attention to the importance of her life, and the fact that she was so much more than just a victim. Your words make it clear that she had dreams, aspirations, and people who loved her deeply. This is a really important message, and I think it helps to ensure that her memory is not lost.

In terms of improvement suggestions, I would say that there are a few places where the phrasing could be tightened up a bit to make the poem flow more smoothly. For example, the line "That very drastic persons Who was on the time of oddball" could perhaps be rephrased to something like "This very dangerous person who was out of control".

Overall, though, I think you've created a powerful and moving piece of poetry. Keep writing! more »
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