A Heart Made of Ice



You have a COLD HEART!!!
that is made OUT OF ICE,
At times your ONREE,
you not even NICE!!

Your MEAN, and CRUEL,
Nobody wants you around.
You walk around looking ANGRY,
With nothing but a FROWN.

Why are you so NASTY???
Why do you act that WAY???
People are starting to wonder
 to this very day!!

There was once a time that
You were really cool, but
whatever happened in the
 past has now got you
 FEELING BLUE!!

You are so UNFRIENDLY,
and you are so UNKIND,
Maybe someday a
POSITIVE CHANGE
we shall find.

I see that you are ANGRY,
 I see that your MAD,
You won't tell us what is WRONG,
At times you seem so SAD.

We will let you ALONE
We will let you have some time,
That HOPEFULLY someday
You go back to being KIND!!

A HEART made of ICE!!
We Understand, and that's Okay!!
Our Love will melt your sorrows!!
And warm your Heart one Day!!!

I hope that we didn't offend you, or
Hurt you in any way,
If so, PLEASE FORGIVE US!!
We hope that you are Okay!!

I hope this FRIENDSHIP isn't over,
I hope it hasn't  come to an end,
Although your going through struggles,
I hope we are still FRIENDS!!

Even when you are going through,
We all will still be there,
We Hope we are still FRIENDS,
And we do REALLY CARE!!!!


B.R.
Date: 05/8/2023
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Written on May 08, 2023

Submitted by belindar.65825 on May 09, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XABA XXBX CDBD XXEFF CGEXG BHXH XXDG ADXD BDXD BXXI BBIB BX
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,246
Words 293
Stanzas 12
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 5, 5, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 2

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