Scarlet Tears



Scarlet Tears

Prompt: Sin Creates A Desperate Letter

Elenore Saga part: 5

To my dearest Charles, it's me, Susan
I know you said it's over, but how have you been
It's been several months, and I miss you so
The long nights make emptiness grow

Why did you choose her to love and not me
Oh, Lord, heal my agony
I offered you my heart, and you broke it
So, in my dingy room, I sit

Surrounded by my sadness to you, I write
As the day grows by shadow's light
You exclaimed I was the one and not Elenore
But in the end I felt like a used whore

I didn't deserve to be tossed aside
Many moonless nights I've cried
Wishing you held me instead
I feel so cold on my lumpy bed

I will leave you alone if you desire
I will send this at once by wire
I must know if this is truly over
Sealed with my family's crested clover

Tell me why it has to be Elenore
When I could love you so much more
Please Charles let me know what you decide
In my one room shack I still reside

It hurts to let go but I understand
If you choose to take her hand
I will forever love you my dear
Respond quickly the end is near

I end this letter in my lonely room
The silence makes my chambers a tomb
I was only wanting to seek closure
Signed forever and always your scarlet lover

A.D. Small
May 7, 2023
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Written on May 07, 2023

Submitted by amberp.35129 on May 08, 2023

Modified by amberp.35129 on January 19, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme A X XXBB CCDD EEAF GGHH AAAA AFGG IIJJ KKAA XX
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,270
Words 271
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 2

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