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i wonder if i killed myself

remi 2006 (new york)

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i wonder if i killed myself
if then you’d really care
i wonder if i killed myself
then you'll notice how much
i was screaming for help
I wonder if i killed myself
if then you would see
that i need parents
to love me and not hurt me
i wonder if i killed myself
then you'd realize you are to blame
i wonder to the point i want to do it
so you can see and feel
how much i was hurting
how much i was drowning
how alone i felt
i wonder if i killed myself
would you think you won
it's not about winning or losing
it's about how nobody
fucking noticed
but now it's too late

About this poem

everybody ignoring you and the signs not feeling enough be neglected

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Written on April 25, 2023

Submitted by leilahmcdouglas7 on April 25, 2023

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Scheme AbAcdAefeAghijjkAljemn
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 583
Words 134
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 22
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