Analysis of i wonder if i killed myself



i wonder if i killed myself
if then you’d really care
i wonder if i killed myself
then you'll notice how much
i was screaming for help
I wonder if i killed myself
if then you would see
that i need parents
to love me and not hurt me
i wonder if i killed myself
then you'd realize you are to blame
i wonder to the point i want to do it
so you can see and feel
how much i was hurting
how much i was drowning
how alone i felt
i wonder if i killed myself
would you think you won
it's not about winning or losing
it's about how nobody
fucking noticed
but now it's too late


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Poetic Form
Metre 1101111 111101 1101111 111011 111011 1101111 11111 11110 1110111 1101111 11101111 11010111111 111101 111110 111110 10111 1101111 11111 110110110 10111 1010 11111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 583
Words 134
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 22
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 441
Words per stanza (avg) 120

About this poem

everybody ignoring you and the signs not feeling enough be neglected

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Written on April 25, 2023

Submitted by leilahmcdouglas7 on April 25, 2023

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