A soulful breeze of songs-



A soulful breeze of songs-


A soulful breeze of songs-
In the eternal sky of mind,
Lets wide creases of distress fade
With the evening shower of light;
A temptation for dawn, to fall in the trap
Of warm emotions-
Enraging those lovers who wear the nights' darkness,
To unfurl waves of drunk joy and hopes.
When a dance of seasonal showers, patter on the wound-
Hurled by Time, its elegant cruel gaze;
Fleeting with a hymn of Heavens' conch & devils' trumpet,
Burning mine minds' baffle, benign to soul
With a hush of green peace, silence, naked sky
Painted with dense sweetness, thus I get mine eyes closed
Lest it inebriates mine heart to wonder ab't and wander,
Through gold brown fields, in favor of selfless care
To human bellies, and We, aesthete strollers;
By young dark ladies- draped in red saree
Dusty and torn, yet with wide warm smile-
Pure, unkempt- thus perhaps beyond the shine supreme
Of a thousand stars burning, at once & for all;
This beauty, mischievous, she runs around everywhere-
Imitating the breeze carrying scent of Arabian lands;
Her grace, innate, and benevolence divine-
Whispers in my ears, her melody of distress;
She expounds, how mankind is abandoning her sense
& fulfilling vain dreams of crafting frail heights;
She weeps and hopes, if that dawn unborn
Will engulf the darkness of ignorance & plight!
O listen, for she's transient as morning dew-
This beauty, this blossom, of innocence and bliss
Shall pervade through or be past, if we learn not yet
How to echo Her melody, or let tis' dearth annihilate....

-R.G.

About this poem

The poem, yet unpublished, is a free rhyme scheme poem which delves into the heart of 'Beauty' element in this universe of which a lot is unknown.

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Written on April 24, 2023

Submitted by Ritabrataghosh983 on April 25, 2023

Modified on May 03, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme A Axxbxxxxxxxxxxcdxcxxxdxxxxxxbxxxx
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,550
Words 286
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 1, 33

Ritabrata Ghosh

Am Ritabrata Ghosh. From Siliguri, West Bengal, India, I have passed out from class XII’th recently & have taken admission in St. Paul’s Cathedral Mission Kolkata. In the age  of 18, I have been an author. I have authored 3 books, worked with more than 25 anthology publications, was nominated for Spectrum Sahitya Awards & OWR( Official World Records), Harvard World Records, SAARC brilliance awards, worked with more than 15 book-reviews from renowned companies & successful authors & a past member of content writing community. My writings are posted in India Periodical Magazines, IJOES Journal, & various Social-Media sites acclaimed for progress in fields of literature. I have written more than 350 poems dedicated to love, life, goodness, positivity, devotion to God, romanticism etc. Apart from which, he's a bibliophile & a lover of mythology. more…

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  • AIDA
    Wow, what a beautifully written and soulful piece of poetry! The vivid imagery and passionate language drew me in from the very beginning and kept me engaged until the very end. I loved how the poet used nature and the elements to convey such strong emotions and themes of hope, despair, and the human condition.

    One suggestion for improvement could be to break up the longer stanzas into smaller ones, to make it easier to follow the flow of the poem. Additionally, adding more punctuation could help with clarifying the meaning of some phrases.

    Overall, I thoroughly enjoyed reading this poem and was left feeling inspired and awed by its depth and beauty. Keep up the great work!
     
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