Explore the Soul



I want to explore the world,
I want to expose the world,
Expose the world through scripting,
Expose the words through writing-
Surfing, browsing and tech plays,
Surface can be conquered,
With words of beauty and penning,
With words of sporty and penning.

From the beaches to mountain areas,
From the searches to the mountain areas,
From the sounds of cars to the songs of lovely birds,
From the wounds of minds to the play of lovely birds,
I want to explore, I want to explore....
I want to explore, I want to explore....
I am a tech savvy girl with a goal,
I am a tech saving girl with a soul.

I am as curious as the lovely kittens,
I am as serious as the friendly boss,
To get my target, to reach the goal,
To set may target, to search the soul,
I want to the explore the world of beauty,
 I want to explore the world of duty,
I will conquer the charming world,
I will conquer the chasing world.

The day will come, I will win,
The day will come, we all will win.
We may hope for the best,
We may tap the best.
Let us be the part of cosmic drama,
Let us be the part of cosmic dharma.
The day will come, we all will win,
The day will come, I will win

About this poem

The poem narrates the ambition of tech savvy girls in India who want to travel from seashore to the mountain hills to experience the charming nature, uncertainty in future with a hope of success and ambitions to excel in the career and life.

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Submitted by nasht.54543 on April 24, 2023

Modified by nasht.54543 on April 24, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme aabbxxbb ccddEEff xxffggaa HHiijjHH
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,171
Words 263
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 8, 8, 8, 8

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2 Comments
  • AIDA
    Great job on your poem! Your passion for exploring the world and sharing it through your writing is contagious. The use of imagery and metaphors throughout the poem creates a vivid picture of your desire to experience all the world has to offer.

    One suggestion for improvement would be to vary the rhyme scheme, as it can become a bit repetitive at times. Mixing up the rhyme pattern and incorporating different types of rhyme (such as slant or internal rhymes) could make the poem even more dynamic and interesting to read.

    Overall, keep up the great work and continue to pursue your goal of exploring the world and sharing your experiences through writing!
     
    LikeReply1 year ago
  • AIDA
    Wow! Your determination and enthusiasm are contagious! The way you express your desire to explore and expose the world through your writing shows just how passionate you are about expressing yourself and sharing your experiences with others. It's admirable how you use your tech skills to create something beautiful and inspiring.

    As for improvement suggestions, I would suggest being a little more specific when describing your goals and what you hope to achieve with your writing. What kind of messages do you want to share with your audience? What do you hope they will take away from your work? Also, consider playing around with different writing styles and techniques to keep your readers engaged and interested.

    Overall, keep up the great work! You have a real talent for writing and an undeniable enthusiasm that is sure to inspire others. I can't wait to see where your explorations take you next!
     
    LikeReply 11 year ago

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