what she has became



She was once a child with light in her eyes.
she was once a child who spend time with family.
she was once that child who love to go to school.
she was once a child ...willing to stay alive.

she now a teen with dark tearful eyes  
she now a teen that do not want to go to school.
she now a teen that is always alone.
she now a teen that wish to be dead.

It scary to think that ll she wants is her soul to be free.
all she wants now is to say goodbye.
And become a beautiful star in the sky.

About this poem

This is a poem about a girl after year of battling mental health. And that life can destroy people.

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Written on May 04, 2021

Submitted by kimmymaxxx on March 14, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCX ACXX BDD
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 494
Words 119
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 3

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