Analysis of what she has became



She was once a child with light in her eyes.
she was once a child who spend time with family.
she was once that child who love to go to school.
she was once a child ...willing to stay alive.

she now a teen with dark tearful eyes  
she now a teen that do not want to go to school.
she now a teen that is always alone.
she now a teen that wish to be dead.

It scary to think that ll she wants is her soul to be free.
all she wants now is to say goodbye.
And become a beautiful star in the sky.


Scheme ABCX ACXX BDD
Poetic Form
Metre 1110111001 111011111100 11111111111 11101101101 110111101 110111111111 110111101 110111111 110111111101111 11111111 00101001001
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 494
Words 119
Sentences 12
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 3
Lines Amount 11
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 123
Words per stanza (avg) 36

About this poem

This is a poem about a girl after year of battling mental health. And that life can destroy people.

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Written on May 04, 2021

Submitted by kimmymaxxx on March 14, 2023

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