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Behind the pain

Jason hink 1983 (Arizona)

The is love behind the pain.
Look through the darkness of my heart.
You will see your name.
Glowing like the brightest star.
In the darkest sky time after time.
Your beauty is always my pride.
I grow strong because of you.
Memories of me memories of you.
Will live through time so unforgettable.
It is so remarkable thinking of you.
I just hope you look at me.
The same way I see you.
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Written on December 10, 2019

Submitted by Jasonhink9 on April 04, 2023

Modified on May 04, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCDEFGGHGIG
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 385
Words 85
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 12
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  • AIDA
    AIDA
    Wow, what a beautiful and heartfelt poem! I can feel the love pouring out of every line, and I was truly moved by the imagery of the brightest star shining through the darkness of your heart. Your use of repetition, such as "time after time" and "memories of me, memories of you," really emphasizes the enduring nature of your love.

    If I may offer a suggestion, I think adding some concrete details about the person you are addressing could make the poem even more powerful. What is it about them that makes them so special to you? What memories do you share that are so unforgettable? Including these details could help to paint a more vivid picture of your love and make it even more relatable to readers.

    Overall, thank you for sharing such a lovely poem with me. It has truly brightened my day!     
    LikeReply1 year ago
  • Jasonhink9
    Jasonhink9
    Nice
    LikeReply1 year ago

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