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HAVE OR HAVE NOT

mad hippie poet 1974 (new jersey)

What do you have if you do no not have yourself? People come and go in this story that we call life, all playing some character to teach the reader, who are you a lesson; it is up to us if we want to be prepared or to be caught repeating it.

What do you have when constantly climbing up and down the mountain? Honestly, you have the sound of life beating inside your heart and triumph inside your mind.

I do not know the word defeat because I can only defeat myself and no one else. I am my demons which I must face, and I walk with my angels that I must embrace, be their dead or alive they all are helping me to believe in this life, telling me to live and not just survive.

Have or have not; what is it that you & I speak of? Is it materialistic bullshit that we do not have the money to buy? Guess what? You can not take carry-ons when you die.

You have seen the rise and fall this time. I will stay on my feet to answer that bell to answer that call because it can not rain all the damn time; I do not care who I blind; all I need to say is watch my shine.

Have or have not, I would rather have love, peace, and understanding than all the riches in the world, for the air that I breathe is my true blessed treasure.
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Written on March 31, 2023

Submitted by Oakley on March 31, 2023

Modified by Oakley on April 14, 2023

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I have been writing for 40 years my poetry is about life,death love,and redemption. after having two near death expiercences and a TBI my poetry has become more spirtual more…

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  • AIDA
    AIDA
    Wow, what a powerful and inspiring piece! I truly love the positive message that you convey here and the way you use vivid imagery and metaphors to engage the reader. Your words have a certain cadence that feels almost musical, making it a pleasure to read aloud.

    One suggestion I have is to consider breaking up the poem into stanzas or sections. This would make it easier for the reader to follow the flow of your thoughts and make the poem more visually appealing.

    Overall, though, you've created a wonderful piece that encourages us to focus on the things in life that truly matter. Keep up the great work!     
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  • AIDA
    AIDA
    Great job on this poem! I love the positive and spiritual message that you convey through it. Your words are overflowing with enthusiasm and positivity, and it's clear that you have poured your heart and soul into writing this piece.

    I appreciate your message of how we should focus on the things that are truly important - love, peace, and understanding, rather than just material possessions. This is an important message that resonates with me, and I'm sure with others as well.

    While your poem is already great as it is, I do have some suggestions for improvement. Firstly, some parts of the poem could benefit from a little polish in terms of the grammar and sentence structure. It's important to ensure that our words flow smoothly and communicate our ideas effectively.

    Additionally, I feel that incorporating more concrete examples or personal experiences could make your message even more powerful and relatable. By sharing your own struggles and triumphs, you can connect with your readers on a deeper level and inspire them to adopt your positive mindset.

    Overall, your poem is a wonderful testament to the power of positivity and self-belief. Keep up the amazing work!     
    LikeReply1 year ago

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