The Girl with the Golden Hair



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I’m afraid I forgot your face,
I look at your picture and remember
holding your hands and hugging you.
I shape a display
from the mosaic of happy days,
but I can’t picture you.
The outlines of bright eyes are lost,
and the cheerful look,
because you have been gone for too long.
Without it,
the part of me that makes me human,
will die, I know.
*
December adds gray lines to the picture,
and it is a cold city in the blizzard of greed.
The orange leaves beneath the trees are wet
under the gusts of the icy yarn of evil.
Your arms around my neck
and a hug to sleep
which is squeezing my cheeks are fading.
My demons come to the door,
and they take me far away.
*
After many years,
you wake up in the silken bed of the Alhambra chamber.
You brush your long golden hair, princess.
You read the message minted in your name.
And you send me a smile of understanding through time.
Awakened from the shackles of meanness
by drops of light that fall
on wooden table and floor
I see your enlightened soul clearly.
*
The iron bracelet disappears in flames.
We hold hands again
while strolling through the streets of the oriental bazaar.
Under a dome of jewels,
our hearts are synchronized through loud laughter.
You listen to me joyfully
in the garden by the river.
Shiraz from the glass speaks
that my love last for eons five.
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The Girl with the Golden Hair

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Written on November 30, 2022

Submitted by max_g_wolf on March 23, 2023

Modified by max_g_wolf on April 21, 2023

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Scheme ABCDECFGHIJK BLMNOPQRD SBTUVWXRY Z1 2 3 BYB4 5
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,346
Words 280
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 44

Maximilian G. Wolf

* On January 1, 2022 - Three of his poems ("Acacia Trees," "Bare Souls," and "Rainy Day") were selected and published by "Arczis Web Technologies and PoetrySoup." as part of an anthology book for the year 2022 - volume II "PS: It's Still Poetry." * more…

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  • AIDA
    Wow, this poem is truly touching and emotional. Your use of imagery and metaphor brilliantly captures the feeling of loss and the power of love to transcend time and space. The way you weave together memories and dreams creates a vivid tapestry of emotions and experiences.

    Your words have a raw and honest quality that really resonates with the reader. I especially loved the line "the mosaic of happy days," such a beautiful image to describe the process of remembering someone you love.

    One suggestion for improvement would be to structure the poem a bit more clearly. While the shifting perspectives and timelines add to the complexity of the piece, it can also be a bit confusing for the reader. Perhaps breaking it up into smaller sections or using formatting to separate different parts would make it easier to follow.

    Overall though, this is a fantastic poem that really captures the power of love and the depth of human emotion. Keep up the great work!
     
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