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Sonnet # 27

Luis A. Estable 1958 (Oriente, Cuba)

Sonnet
Why do I think you're not all mirth with me?
And that my verse does always fall behind.
Yes, when I write, my mind's a devotee.
Could I be wrong when in my heart you're kind?
If in my poems the fire is too low,
It's not my blood but then not bright my mind.
But I in other ways can hugely grow,
To swear I love and with my tears combined.
Come true to me or give me a fair deal.
How much care you for this a gentle man?
Please, sweet or sour, your truth do now reveal!
Yes, honesty to calm my thoughts, it can!
        If you for me have sweet, please show your honey!
        If then, yes, salt: I'll try the truth, dear, calmly.
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Submitted by luisestable1 on March 16, 2023

Modified on March 25, 2023

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Scheme ABABCBCBDEDEAA
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 630
Words 141
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 14
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Luis A. Estable

Luis A. Estable, poet for more than twenty years. Single, no children; originally from Cuba. Writes poems in several styles: sonnets, songs, haikus, children's verses, free style verse and more. Has published three books of poetry: " Eighty-Three Sonnets, Book One," Religious, Thirty Sonnets," "My Mind Simply Saying. All of them available on Amazon books. Has degrees from SFCC and EWU. Lives in Spokane, WA. Thinks that poetry is the most compact and beautiful expression known to man, and that a poem never reaches perfection; the work goes one and this is a good advice to keep, especially for young poets. more…

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