Icarus Complex



I soared through the air, the sun beaming and covering the world in an enchanting golden light.

As I rose into the air my wings flapping, going higher and higher.

The sun's rays getting hotter and hotter.

I could feel my wings melting more and more

But I didn't stop, I kept moving and flying and going higher.

Higher than anyone has ever gone.

With my wing melted and scorched

The wax burning my skin leaving red marks from my back to my thighs.

Feathers flowing off my back, off my scorned wings.

With my feathers flowing into the wind I can not help but to lean back and laugh.

As though there is a bitter sweet humor to this as I fall.

Fall faster and faster.

I rear my head back and laugh.

Now scored with the burns of wax.

And wings without feathers.

I am content.
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Written on March 02, 2023

Submitted by Your_average_loser on March 08, 2023

Modified on March 31, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme X A A X A X X X X B X A B X X X
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 787
Words 176
Stanzas 16
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1

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  • luisestable1
    The poem is understood if one knows or if one is familiar with the story oy Icarus. But what to make of the ending as being content? Each reader would have his or her take according to the reading he or she gave to these lines. 
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