Who Knew

Gail Walton May 1955 (Ft Campbell Ky)

February 23 


                       Who Knew

Who knew the struggles you were going through or the pain you buried inside.

Who knew when you were all alone you fought silent demons and alone you cried.

Who knew when you woke up it was a struggle to get out of bed,

Who knew although you seemed so happy on the outside ,
There was a war going on inside your head.

You were the life of the party, the loving trusted friend,

Who knew because you didn’t feel you could share the silent journey with any one ,would lead to such a tragic end.

Our hearts are broken and filled with pain
And our lives will be forever changed.

Because of the guilt we feel for not recognizing everything you were going through,
We are haunted by one question
Who knew?

About this poem

This poem is based on someone that took his/her own life because they didn’t feel they could share their inner pain. Based on a recent true event.

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Written on December 14, 2022

Submitted by Terrificgmay on February 05, 2023

Modified on March 14, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme A A B AB C C XX DXD
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 743
Words 153
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 2, 1, 1, 2, 3

Gail Walton May

I am a seasoned female with a loving heart, giving spirit, and strong faith. I have been married for 27 years to an awesome man of God. Together we share 3 children, 8 grandchildren and I great grand. My hobbies are reading, writing and spending time with family and friends. I enjoy sharing the Word of God at every given opportunity whether speaking, writing , plays or teaching . more…

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  • Stevepuls0830
    I loved the message and the flow. The rhyming sequence was impeccable. Wonderful
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