Blasphemy



Blasphemy
(With apologies to John Lennon)

I wonder how it would be on this planetary clod
If primeval man had reached for his brother, instead of God?

What if the very first ever seeker to understand
Discovered “look for forgiveness not from above
But in the soul of your fellow man”?

What if the very first priest of the very first clan
Thought it is not God, but our brother we must seek to understand?

Did we miss a turn?

Should someone once have said
“This is where we start
A journey not to heaven, but our neighbor’s heart”

What if the holiest lines ever penned
Were not God’s immutable demands
But how to hold a stranger’s hand?

What if we all were told that how to pray
Is speak your hurts and needs and hidden fears
Not to God’s but your neighbor’s ears?

How would it be to communicate with open heart at length
And find it was not God’s, but our brother’s forgiveness that gave us strength?

How if we needed love and hope and there was no alternate source
Save the hearts and minds of humanity, and no outside force

And say if there was no journey ending below or beyond the skies
Then heaven would be seeing love for us in a stranger’s eyes

Abolish all churches, abolish all mosques, abolish temples where they stand
Burn the Bible, Torah, Vedas burn the Quran
So that all we have left is each other, to love and understand

About this poem

for John Lennon - ":Imagine"

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Submitted by steve-edwards on February 25, 2023

Modified on March 14, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XA BB BXC CB X BBB BXB XDD EE FF GG BAB
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,378
Words 277
Stanzas 12
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 3, 2, 1, 3, 3, 3, 2, 2, 2, 3

William Stephen Edwards

William Stephen Edwards was raised on a dryland cotton farm in West Texas. He holds a BA in English (1965) and an MS in Speech/Language Pathology and Audiology (1972) from Texas Tech University. Mr. Edwards is a decorated Vietnam veteran and is divorced, with two daughters. Currently he is a retired Speech/Language Pathologist living in Austin, Texas. more…

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