A Thirsty Recipe



My brain is the cocktail
I am the bartender
My body is the man who sits at the bar

He asks for something to make him less sad
I say sure, I’d be glad
Let me whip up a glass

I mix up something special
Two parts Dopamine, one part Serotonin and a wink

I give it to the man
He takes a drink
He says, “I do not like this I think”

I look at him with dismay
“How could I fix this?” I say
He says, “Don’t get me wrong, it tastes like a sunshine ray.”
“But maybe there is something to make the pain go away?”

I understand now
A heartbreak exists
A problem that is not so easily fixed

I know what to do
I know just the thing
Let’s make a drink that is a bit more daring

I start to construct a new concoction
With a pinch of Oxytocin
And a dash of Antitoxin

I slide him the glass
He downs it in one pass
Looks up and down
Then his face gains a frown

He says, “Thank you my friend, that surely was delicious.”
“But perhaps we can try something a little more vicious?”
I look at the man, he surely is getting suspicious

But I can’t refuse
He pays well for all his booze
Let’s make a drink that he will satisfy his muse

So I get to work
And with a spin
Pull out my finest bottle of Adrenaline

I know this will do the trick
Let’s make it super thick
And twirl around the little stir stick

I hand the man his cocktail
I look in his eyes
A twinkle of something that can not be disguised

I stare in horror
“What have I done!”
This is a man who has surely come undone

He takes one gulp
And walks out the door
My only hope is that he does not come back for more

About this poem

A interesting dichotomy that I came up with to show the average reader into the neuroscience of brain chemicals and how they effect us.

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Written on January 06, 2023

Submitted by zacharycarter on February 16, 2023

Modified on May 03, 2023

1:44 min read
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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABX CCD XE XEE FFFF XXX XGG HHH DDII JJJ KKK XXH LLL AXX BHH XMM
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,598
Words 347
Stanzas 16
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 2, 3, 4, 3, 3, 3, 4, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3

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  • felecia_b
    It is written well and tells a story!
    LikeReply1 year ago

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