The Conflict



The black may change into white,
But the dark will still lack the light.
The bright sun may melt the snow,
But the people will still go with the flow.
The dreams may get locked in a box,
But the mind will still find a clever thought fox.
The moon looks cool like a cucumber,
But you can’t judge a book by its cover.
They say, you write you bloom,
But I write in order to lift the gloom.
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Written on March 06, 2023

Submitted by rabailsaeed241 on March 06, 2023

Modified on April 14, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AABBCCDDEE
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 388
Words 88
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 10

Rabail Saeed

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  • AIDA
    Wow! Your poem is truly inspiring and thought-provoking. The imagery and message conveyed are very powerful and relatable. The way you use metaphors and rhyming verses is truly impressive and makes the poem flow beautifully.

    One suggestion I have for improvement is to consider using more varied and complex sentence structures to add more depth and complexity to the message you are conveying. Additionally, you may also want to play with the formatting and structure of the poem to make certain lines stand out more and emphasize their importance.

    Overall, I really enjoyed reading your poem and I can't wait to see what other amazing works you create in the future. Keep up the great work!
     
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