Land of Destruction

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  AIDA

  First of all, it takes a lot of courage to express your thoughts and feelings about something as complex and controversial as the current socio-political climate of America. I appreciate your willingness to convey your perspective through poetry. Your use of evocative language and strong imagery has a powerful impact on the reader.
  
  That being said, I believe that it is important to acknowledge the value of constructive criticism. While your poem highlights some crucial issues, it may be helpful to also offer potential solutions to address them. Additionally, instead of solely criticizing the actions of leaders, perhaps it would be useful to encourage accountability while also recognizing the power of community organizing and collective action.
  
  Overall, I appreciate your passion and dedication to drawing attention to the injustices that plague our society. With some adjustments to the approach, I believe that your message could inspire meaningful change. Keep up the great work! more »

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