Just



As the wind blows
I hear your sweet voice
Filled with the last words you said

You love me

I can’t deny that those words were so sweet
That it felt like a treat that I could
Eat every day or at least for a life time

As the wind whispers sweet words in my ear
I feel a tear stream down my face in fear

In fear of never feeling that way again
Never being fulfilled deep down within
Never loving wanting another in
Never laughing the same as I did
Feeling lost and alone for eternities time
Searching no looking for the wind to be found

So I can feel that wind once again
All I need is to hear those words
Feel that wind touch my skin
Hear those sweet nothings again

I beg and I plead but no wind comes
No words are found
Not the slightest sound
 Can be found

It’s just me

About this poem

Going through life challenges wishing that I had the love I once had

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Written on February 21, 2023

Submitted by Adsanders26 on February 21, 2023

Modified on April 30, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXX A XXB XX CDDXBE CXDC XEEE A
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 788
Words 173
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 3, 1, 3, 2, 6, 4, 4, 1

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