Desperate in Giving Counsel, 1979



Have you heard me?
Give up on seeing that Man.
Five strange jobs in
The last two years.
Nothing but tears in store.
And there’s more.
Two previous women
In Common Law.
A Son he never sees.
Think again Girl, please.
You go out on desperate nights.
Frequent fights.
Yet you say he
Lights up your board.
Good Lord.
Retreat from him as
You would the Plague.
Short lived ache, and then
You’ll love again.

Oh, gotta go now
Oven is ringing, baking done.
(Hangs up the phone. Dial tone.)
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Written on February 14, 2023

Submitted by dougb.21370 on February 14, 2023

Modified on April 09, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AXXXBBCXDDEEAFFXXGG XCX
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 486
Words 109
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 19, 3

Doug Blair

Doug was once a lawyer. Frustrated. Went broke 1987. Turned to manufacturing. People talked straight. Worked hard. Listened when appropriate. Lead Hand Shipper and Workplace Safety. Married to Hilary 1974. Two kids Lauren and Jordan. Poet. Photographer. Hiker-photographer. Harmonica busker. http://puffnchord7.blogspot.com/ more…

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