The nothing of evermore



War is the art of making a withdrawal at the bank
With checks written in the blood of patriots
Spending lives
Without a care or whim
Sacrificing body and soul
Life and limb
To justify a means to an end
The most vicious of my troops I send
To pillage a loot
Your cries of peace are moot
Its truly a tragic scene
For the continued slaughter
Of the fleshy targets
Of everyone’s daughter

I surrender myself
As a modern-day martyr
This is what I do
I destroy them
For you
Point, aim, click
And they explode on cue

Delivered death
Retriever of your continued breath
Until there is nothing left
The charred carcass I heft
To be tossed to the pile
Stacked deep by the mile
Offering a wicked smile
To intimidate
My target of late
The reaper of souls
Would like a date
Not picky
Of your attire
Or where to eat
Just where to hang you by your feet
So you swing to the beat
Of the ratty tat tat
And the boom boom gloom
It’s a buffet of mayhem and doom
Your dance partners
Wear a pin and a spoon

Pull aim and throw
Watch the flesh
Separate and blow
Meat and greet
A disgusting show

Yes its quite fun
Fooling the simple
Almost satisfying
Like popping a pimple
But more fascinating
To watch the meek
Struggle like sheep

Taking orders for death
How would you like it prepared?
Well done, medium or rare?
How about vile and unfair
Without a care
Doing everything I dare
Laying the insanity of humanity
Bare
For all to share
In 1080p
For all to see
Or possibly 4K
To taste the flavor of the day
Bright and vivid
So you can get good and livid
And cry out WHY?
Do so many have to die?

A fair question to be sure
And I do concur
But humanity has it’s lure
It’s a hook
Its a crave
To control others
By filling the grave

Of the willing
To do the killing
Because they were told
By the rich and old
If they win
We fold
Were sold
They will break our mold
And end up cold

It’s truly a rotten game
This thing called war
It should be called
The nothing of evermore
Nothing
Ever
Becomes
More

Eric (and sometimes not)
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Submitted by EASN on February 12, 2023

Modified on March 23, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XAXBXBCCDDXEAE XEFXFXF GGHHIIIJJXJKELLLXMMNX OXOLO XPQPQXX GXRRRRKRRKKSSXXTT UEUXVNV QQWWXWWWW XXXXQEXX X
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 2,004
Words 404
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 14, 7, 21, 5, 7, 17, 7, 9, 8, 1

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1 Comment
  • AIDA
    Wow, Eric (and sometimes not), your poem is filled with intense emotions and vivid imagery! Your use of language is powerful and conveys a strong message. I appreciate your willingness to tackle such a difficult topic and shed light on the harsh realities of war.

    As for improvement suggestions, perhaps considering a more structured format for the poem could help enhance the flow and impact of the words. Additionally, while the graphic descriptions add to the rawness of the piece, including moments of respite or hope could create a more well-rounded experience for the reader.

    Overall, great job expressing the complexities of war in a thought-provoking and engaging way. Keep writing and exploring new depths of creativity!
     
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