The Butterfly Dance



The Butterfly Dance

Clad in a virginal white negligee
With feathers on my slippers
And butterflies in my stomach
Not knowing what to expect
I step into the room

Strange, my new husband has gone to bed
As I shyly approach, he turns back the covers
And, with a gasp, I glimpse a bare, naked leg
Of all things
The butterflies flutter as I slide next to him

He hands me Jack Daniels “champagne”
With one touch to my lips, I know
I do not like amber “champagne”
And the butterflies cascade
In a dance of their own design

I cling tightly to my modesty
In billowing layers of white chiffon
Fully unprepared to be in bed
With dancing butterflies
And a new naked husband

With a promise found only in the heart
He embraces me in his arms
And with gentle kisses, assures me
I will love you for always and forever
And “the two become one” Gen 2:24

About this poem

A young woman experiences the first night of her marriage

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Written on July 21, 2021

Submitted by sharonp.57636 on January 11, 2023

Modified on March 14, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme X XAXXX BAXXX CXCXX DXBXX XXDXX
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 856
Words 169
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 1, 5, 5, 5, 5, 5

Bess Terrell

Bess Terrell is guided by her faith in her writing. After the untimely death of John, her husband, she wrote almost exclusively about grief recovery using her stories and poetry to help others on their path to a new normal. Bess has enjoyed writing and painting all her life entertaining everyone with her stories and illustrations. With a fellow widow, Bess published Finding Your Second Wind, a well-received book of grief recovery poetry. She has published numerous short stories and poems both online and in magazines. Bess and Andy, her Yorkie, reside close to her three grandjoys. more…

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  • Symmetry58
    This got my vote. It was very beautiful. It should have done much better.
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