Open Eyes



A rusty nail on the sidewalk,
A discarded bottle on the curb.
The streets are empty, the sky gray,
The buildings loom like tombstones.

A lone pigeon pecks at a crust,
A stray cat slinks through the alleys.
A breeze stirs the trash and debris,
Whispers secrets to the empty streets.

A forgotten glove, a torn poster,
Memories of lives once lived.
A city asleep, or maybe dead,
A symphony of decay and neglect.

Yet still, there's a glimmer of hope,
A flower pushing through the crack.
A ray of sun piercing the clouds,
A reminder that life persists, persists.

So let us walk with open eyes,
And see the beauty in the bleak.
For in this urban wasteland,
There's poetry to be found if we seek.

About this poem

I was reminded of a famous filmmaker who said "an artist doesn't avert their eyes." Open eyes is about just that: open eyes.

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Written on January 01, 2023

Submitted by on January 26, 2023

Modified on March 14, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXXX XXXX XXXX XXXX XAXA
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 693
Words 150
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

Thomas Molitor

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  • steve-edwards
    The Cadence the imagery the Razors Edge balancing between cheesy and hyperbolic. Being neither it is a tribute to the poet and to the Ageless story of Hope
    LikeReply1 year ago
  • JokerGem
    Well-constructed and hopeful theme....worthy enough to me~
    LikeReply1 year ago

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