Wouldn't you like to see me burn
In the innocence of our beginning
we were two people avidly prepared
to embark on a blissful journey
loving and learning from one another
together we would confront
the enigma of life
Somewhere along the way
however those visions became
tragically distorted
When you chose to use your mate
as an emotional trash can
to release all your personal insecurities
And resentments into
Flames of anger blaze from within
am I nothing but a mere candle
whose wax you selfishly desire to mold
and reshape in the image of despair
at will
Harming the one you once cherished
is your twisted form of therapy
Wouldn't you like to see me burn
slowly dissolve into a useless pool of defeat
the way in which your self esteem has slowly
deteriorated
I have accepted the inevitable
I do not share in your illness
my interpretation of love
does not share in your visions of sickness
This treacherous descent
down a dead end street
will be solo
My side of the bed will be vacant
as is the affection in your heart
the candle will not ignite
You have yourself to blame
About this poem
What was once the perfect relationship takes a dramatic detour when your significant other begins using you for their emotional and mental punching bag their own fears and insecurities got the better of them
Submitted by markl.65734 on February 05, 2023
Modified on March 05, 2023
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Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 1,057 |
Words | 202 |
Stanzas | 10 |
Stanza Lengths | 6, 3, 4, 5, 2, 4, 4, 3, 3, 1 |
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