The Box



Within the box, my life is held.
Just open the cover and they’ll begin to tell.
A story of deception, a tale of two
Words that shouldn’t have been written, said, or even thought.
But yet I keep them; for it was love that was sought.

I’ll keep them as a reminder of the pain that they brought.
In each sentence my heart breaks in two,
But it was joy and gladness in the beginning I knew.

At first it was friendship, then a risk and a rush.
Some made me excited, some made me feel flushed.
My body and soul once again came alive.
Now as the end draws near, I don’t think I can survive.

I’m crushed, I’m numb, I’m back to near death.
It’s taken all I have, every last breath.

About this poem

A poem of old love.

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Written on October 04, 1995

Submitted on January 17, 2023

Modified on May 01, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXABB BAA XXCC DD
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 691
Words 149
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 3, 4, 2

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  • dylan_n
    Amazing peom! I felt it to the heart! Outstanding job, please make more!
    LikeReply1 year ago

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