Birthday rain



Outside It’s raining, today!
What to wait for,
Take a glance of beautiful scenes, today!
don’t restrict your heart for,
let’s slide on ground and mud to come all over face
let’s clothes and shoes to be dirty today!
Let this wonder drop to do wonder for you
Let’s enjoy with nature & your soul today!
I am in search for Shade & sat under the tree
The dew drops from the leaves falling on my face today!
The coldness Shake me a little;
Oh! Rain you’re so refreshing today!
Let me enjoy fully with all my imagination
I can feel the real experience of standing near sea shore
At the same time experiencing running on muddy ground
I Might be wondering myself with my vivid experience
But this all happen because of you “Rain”
Its my birthday today; how you know I got amazed!
It seems like you want to celebrate it with me
You’re raining so heavily to wish me a prosperous life.
You rained today limitless which I am waiting for a long
You bring joy today limitless which I affirm as blessing
You retrieved my memory today & rejuvenate the whole body
All the annoying atmosphere has gone
& all my doubts flown away
Rain today you made me “insane”.
                                                                                                                     -   Written by
                                                                                                                   -   Aaditya paliwal
                                                                                                                          
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Submitted on January 17, 2023

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme ABABCADAEAFAGBHIJKELMNEOAJPF
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,557
Words 235
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 28

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