Analysis of Birthday rain
Outside It’s raining, today!
What to wait for,
Take a glance of beautiful scenes, today!
don’t restrict your heart for,
let’s slide on ground and mud to come all over face
let’s clothes and shoes to be dirty today!
Let this wonder drop to do wonder for you
Let’s enjoy with nature & your soul today!
I am in search for Shade & sat under the tree
The dew drops from the leaves falling on my face today!
The coldness Shake me a little;
Oh! Rain you’re so refreshing today!
Let me enjoy fully with all my imagination
I can feel the real experience of standing near sea shore
At the same time experiencing running on muddy ground
I Might be wondering myself with my vivid experience
But this all happen because of you “Rain”
Its my birthday today; how you know I got amazed!
It seems like you want to celebrate it with me
You’re raining so heavily to wish me a prosperous life.
You rained today limitless which I am waiting for a long
You bring joy today limitless which I affirm as blessing
You retrieved my memory today & rejuvenate the whole body
All the annoying atmosphere has gone
& all my doubts flown away
Rain today you made me “insane”.
- Written by
- Aaditya paliwal
Scheme | ABABCADAEAFAGBHIJKELMNEOAJPF |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1111001 1111 1011100101 101111 111101111101 1101111001 11101111011 1011101101 11011111001 0111011011101 01011010 111101001 1101101110010 111010100110111 101101000101101 111100111100100 1111001111 111011111101 11111110111 110110011101001 110110011110101 111011001101110 1011100010100110 100101011 111101 10111101 101 11 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 1,557 |
Words | 235 |
Sentences | 11 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 28 |
Lines Amount | 28 |
Letters per line (avg) | 33 |
Words per line (avg) | 8 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 921 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 224 |
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Submitted on January 17, 2023
Modified on March 05, 2023
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