deranged moments



the tears you’ve held 
driving alluring eyes on me,
let them go......
not to be friends now,
but to be lovers only,
we need to talk about
& silence is not the way....

I felt the mutiny in my veins.....
receive me before I rupture these plans 
like the birth of ink on paper
tearing the pen's tip to breathe...
call me before you exhale,
when no one's around at your super hour...
kill the distance between us .....
the eruption will cease ...
more peace to save ...
when you lay down for me ....

Crave your mind & come undone ....
let me seize the moment,
everything will begin.....
when you confirm I'm the only one,
how many will hate me?

Breathe into broken flutes ..
sing for the moment
about the dark & the blues,
about not getting enough
of what you want...
in your deranged moments....

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the confusion of being zoned and what it entails

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Written on September 12, 2022

Submitted by azdi404 on January 16, 2023

Modified by azdi404 on March 20, 2023

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Scheme XAXXAXX XXBXXBXXXA CDXCA XDXXXX
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 820
Words 172
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 7, 10, 5, 6

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