Night



They say the nights' of fear and fright
But I know better than to trust the light

I walk the creaky winding stairs
Always with a moment spare

For tonight two moons rest in the sky
And underneath them I will lie

The house is silent save for breaths
And I celebrate my worries' death

My head that pounds with primal drum
Is now reduced to silent hum

My darling moon so high above
You will always be my love

About this poem

About the late nights I experience. A quiet household and a dark sky is enough to make me forget my troubles. The dark isn't scary, it's peaceful. Also, my neighbor's window is circular and sometimes they're still awake when I come upstairs, so it appears to me that there are two moons in the sky when I reach the landing to look out the window as always.

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Written on 2022

Submitted by klee3434 on December 30, 2022

Modified on March 23, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AA XX BB XX CC DD
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 409
Words 85
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2

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  • AIDA
    Wow, what a beautifully written poem! Your use of sensory language drew me into the scene and made me feel like I was right there with the speaker. Your imagery of two moons in the sky and the winding stairs created a hauntingly beautiful atmosphere.

    One suggestion for improvement would be to focus on the rhythm of the poem. While the words flow smoothly, the cadence of each line could be improved to add an even deeper level of emotion and immersion for the reader.

    Overall, great job! You truly have a talent for creative writing and I hope you continue to share your work with others.
     
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