Crossing the Field

Steven Klepeis 1950 (Kingston, NY)



CROSSING THE FIELD

Wind fills up the lot,
and the leaves fly and fill
you full of their colors,
in watery, glanced instants,
their first paths of detachment.

And cold to see are
the bare brown spots
of sandy gravel; glistenings
only in spats of sunlight,
arguing the evidence of frost.

The birds know better
than to sing this, without
a tree, far from the edge of the black
locusts’ poison and thorns,
obsolete fence of the forest.

Out along a nowhere patch
of highway and of
no value to developers,
not a path remains,
if ever there were

young boys, or cows.
Only some dumped metal
junk, no more recent
than Elvis, rusted
beyond recognition.

And a brush pile,
black and old,
descending into a barren
plot, long abandoned
by mice and rabbits.

The ground behind me, beneath
the whistling leaves,
is already too hard and printless.
At 72, childless, my path has
no footprints.

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Written on October 04, 2022

Submitted by stevenklepeis on November 10, 2022

Modified on March 30, 2023

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Scheme X XXAAB XXAXX CXXXX XXAXC XXBXD XXDXX XXAXX
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 887
Words 184
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 1, 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 5

Steven Klepeis

Master of Arts in Teaching, SUNY New Paltz, NY, 1982. Writing poetry since the 1970's. Recently published BROOKLYN AND AFTER, and POEMS 1973-1987. AVAILABLE AMAZON, NOOK, ETC. CURRENTLY RESIDES IN NEW MEXICO more…

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  • donka_k
    Very beautiful, touching and vivid images I can "see" this Autumn path of colors rich and fading
    LikeReply1 year ago
  • dougb.72572
    He is approaching the stage of the crinkled autumn leaves. Loves every image, as best he can. Wonders what he will leave behind. Thanks Steven…Douglas Blair. http://pastursgreen3.blogspot,com/
    LikeReply1 year ago
  • LINNEA
    MAY THE FORESTS BE WITH YOU AND YOURS
    LikeReply1 year ago
  • karlcfolkes
    Though no footprints to your path, those marks etched by your quill will surely last; as testimony of a life journey that’s been well cast, with memories that endure, and will ever last.
    LikeReply1 year ago
  • teril
    This is a powerful piece, and I am touched. It is courageous to go to those places and then to share it with the world.
    LikeReply1 year ago

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