donka_k
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Thank you so much.

A heart-felt poem full of powerful imagery, deep with significance. It brings peace and comfort to a weary soul. This poem is a winner! I hope you participate in a poetry contest, Kimberly. Blessings to you. more »

Your comment is poetry itself! Thank you so very much for taking the time to read this poem and for your keen observation and inspiring review.

"And to walk on that journey and do what it takes". I enjoyed reading your poem. It's thoughtful, honest, inspiring.

Building up. Thank you for sharing.

Thank you for your lovely comment. Glad you enjoyed it.

Rich and beautiful expression of the condition of the heart. Your words are clear and deeply meaningful

What a beautiful tribute!1 Heart-felt, love-filled, as if sending a blessing to this person on his next journey. I loved it.

Thank you

This poem is like a Psalm, a song of rebirth or discovery of one's own real identity. Very subtle yet powerful!! A true delight to read. Bravo!

A re-assuring promise from a source other than the Bible. Thank you for your comment. And yes, Heb. 4:12 is what the poem is about. God bless

This poem speaks in a deepest way to every "invisible child" including myself.
It takes a lot of courage in adulthood not only to admit that we have been "small" in the eyes of our parents but to decide to "grow" in our own eyes.
I loved the clarity and simplicity of your words, powerful, direct , light in the darkness. Thank you . more »

Thank you for taking the time to really read this poem. Your comment is insightful and made me think... again. I wrestle daily on my spiritual walk, and your review tells me that if what comes out of it stirs other poets... it's worth the struggle. Thank you more »

"... the rocks even speak it" I loved the clarity of thought, the conviction of the Holy Spirit! Poetry--- a wonderful way to preach the Gospel!!

"Teach us from your word..." A prayer for all of us, Jesus' followers! Thank you for sharing