Shooting star



you and I lay under the sky full of stars;
calm nature,
I see your blue eyes;
so calm, so deep, filled with love and innocent;
your cheeks , so soft;
I'm gonna give you my heart;
your smell, your voice ;
let's swim on our own thoughts;
look! it's a star;
no, it's a shooting star;
let's make a wish;
'Cause, you're a sky full of stars;
I think I saw you;
I think I see you;

About this poem

I wrote this poem because I love to watch the night sky, stars, and moon. I and my girlfriend share our first kiss under a sky full of bright shining stars and suddenly we see a shooting star, and we make a wish.

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Written on August 22, 2022

Submitted by buddhiashen.info on August 22, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCDEFGHIIJAKK
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 374
Words 89
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 14

Buddhi Ashen

I am from a rural country, I spent much of my time outdoors. Today I live in a big city, I have an amazing girlfriend who supports me with everything. I enjoy writing poetry and playing karate hiking and biking once in a while. more…

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