Shooting star
you and I lay under the sky full of stars;
calm nature,
I see your blue eyes;
so calm, so deep, filled with love and innocent;
your cheeks , so soft;
I'm gonna give you my heart;
your smell, your voice ;
let's swim on our own thoughts;
look! it's a star;
no, it's a shooting star;
let's make a wish;
'Cause, you're a sky full of stars;
I think I saw you;
I think I see you;
About this poem
I wrote this poem because I love to watch the night sky, stars, and moon. I and my girlfriend share our first kiss under a sky full of bright shining stars and suddenly we see a shooting star, and we make a wish.
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Written on August 22, 2022
Submitted by buddhiashen.info on August 22, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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Quick analysis:
Scheme | ABCDEFGHIIJAKK |
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Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 374 |
Words | 89 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 14 |
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